the writing and description overall is good though I feel the story a little empty honestly. it would have been better if there was an introduction about how the mc died in the first chapter, here we're directly thrown in action without context(the synopsis isn't enough it has to be in the story ) another point is that it's a system story, I expect more action, how will the mc evolve further? it feels too slow. I hope to see an improvement in these aspects , you have won a daily reader after all :D
