Stopped at ch.113
there are many good points, namely the quality of writing, the configuration of the world, the game system.
among the problems there are the secondary characters (mark) who are just unbearable, the romance which is slowly built and which just has no place and worst of all, MC.
Even though I loved MC at first she's stupid. completely and utterly stupid. It makes you wonder how such a person can be a 36 year old mother.
there's also the fact that EVERY D*MN CHARACTER STUTTERS IN EVERY D*MN PARAGRAPH!
I would say give it a try if you don't have anything better to read and see if you like it, if you can tolerate the flaws it could be a good novel with lots of chapters.
