Heroic Death System - Reviews

'There's too many of them!' Screamed Lord Gerat as he pushed his shield in to the face of another Åscatorian. The battle had been raging for some time now. They were well past midday now. Thankfully the sun stayed out late in these summer months.

"Oh yeah we got new names for each other.. " Chaeyoung said.

that a stranger is peeping at her then she

Bahasa Silet: Erangan batin yang berkobar dalam rongga kenistaan hingga menjerit, menjalar asa kehampaan .

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

"Or you're just too lazy!" said Serenity.

I arrived at my house.

Hey people...This is my first attempt at trying to harness the gift of the pen, so I plead with you all to forgive all detected errors and short-comings, as the mistakes of a imperfect author.You all are free to criticize and ask radical questions ..I will surely reply them in the comments.Once more  forgive me and prepare to suffer the danger of been addicted.

Biased review, since I am the authorAlso, please tell me if there are any errors in my novel, I hate errors. I would love to correct them as soon as possible.

its quite good one .. lets see how it progresses