Here Comes The Lady Chef - Reviews

Father Lin sighed, he knew he had to answer him as it could be the chance of survival for the family "We have been betrayed. My brother or your uncle has decided to go behind my back and partner the clan with the Situ Clan even though I specifically told them it was a bad idea. I guess the only obstacle now in their plan is me and your brother. They even implicated your mother, by this point I bet my Uncle is trying to get the elders to change clan leadership from me to him."

Sebastian: Simply hopeless.

     "Mencuri? Hah." Sehun malah tertawa. "masuklah." tak lagi menghiraukan keberadaan Sunny disana, ia malah membuka pintu ruang istirahatnya dan menyuruh Yoona untuk segera masuk.

"When I think about it, this place hold many of memories, right?" She said.

You:okay thats it *puts mark on mute and go back home* You:i should cook something ive been walking for i dont know how much *you go to the fridge and get some eggs and start cooking* You:*mumbles Kobe Steak* hm hm hm hm hm hm hm la la la la la *finish cooking and starts to eat* You:kami... jhon..... *hears doorbell ring* You:wth WHO IS THERE *no answer* You:uuuuuuuggggghhhhhhh *walks to the door* kids these days *opens door* hello *looks down* oh hey an be- wait an beer bottle *picks up bottle* hmmmmm *puts bottle on the coffee table* i need a nap *goes to bedrom and lays on the bed* (A few hours later) *you start dreaming* You:*wakes up in an ink puddle in a white void* what where am i *you stand up and realize that the ink is covering your body* WTH HEY QUIT IT *you struggle to try to stop the ink but instead falls on the floor and get stuck* UGH *the ink starts covering your face then you struggle to breath* help anyone.... *you wake up again but not in your house but in another void while fire surrounds you* what is going *you start getting pushed by nothing* hey wth *gets pushed into the fire* AGHHHHHH *you wake up  but you arent you but jhon* wth this isnt my body this is jhons body *you realize your in the last spot where you last saw jhon* oh no this is jhons house *gets of the roof and onto the ground an sees jhon kyani car oh he worked with kyani (not sponsored by kyani of course) *you get in the car and drive to your house as your too lazy to walk* HEY!!! *you start to think on what happened to your body* wait if im in jhons body then what happened to my body * you start driving faster to your house and finally arrive* You:god dammit i forgot im in jhons body and my keys arent on jhons body *then you remember your basement door isnt locked and the basement has a door connecting to your house first floor so you go to your basement untill you see mark laughing with candles lit in a circle then you remember mark was a satanist you pick up a crowbar then start approching mark* You:mark you okay *OUT OF NOWHERE (really we used that again) mark runs after you and looks like he wants to eat you* You:MARK WHY YOU LITTLE PIECE OF SHI- GET OF ME *you struggle to fight back* Mark:FEOWJEP&3&37$819# ,#19IWHDBQJ You:YOUR SPEAKING GIBBERISH Mark:*rips of jhons hand* You:AGHHHHHH *(of course you start bleeding feeling pain BLAH BLAH BLAH LETS GET TO THE POINT CMON MAGGOTS FASTER) anyways you hit mark in the head with the crowbar giving you a chance to fight back which you did* You:mark i dont wanna fight or hurt you mark:*charges right into jhons chest eating his flesh* You:i can make this easier *hits self with crowbar and wakes up in bed* You:jesus my head wait what time is i- *you look at the clock and after all of those hours its still 7:30* You:wth i mean it looks like 7:30 but why is everyones clock broken *you remember mark* oh shoot *as you walk downstairs you see that the doors open and see a blood trail going back to your room *you feel weird and starting throwing up blood and starts spinning around in circles having no controll over your body and fall to the floor and wih the last seconds you had you realize* You:the sun died

Bahasa Silet: goncangan kesetiaan cinta kini kandas sudah

A loud sound could be heard, the Lil' girl placed her hands on her ears, covering it from the loud sound. She covered her eyes as the glass of the car breaks into pieces, flying everywhere. Then, all she could hear was silence, she blinked her eyes, as she started to open her eyes.

The next day as I enter the room I found Miyano.

They resumed the job of cleaning the walls It didn't take long, it was clear the enemy just left them here to gain some time for them to find Robert and finish the job, they clearly didn't have any hopes of winning this fight, but they were trying to at least make this, not a complete failure. After ending his job in the walls Max and his entourage went searching for a high point from where support the units that were fighting in the town square.

Fungus symbolizes purity, look how God put those fungus in our butt.

The concept is interesting, the characters are unique, and the grammar is quite good. There are only slight issues with flow and repetitiveness that should resolve as the author gets into the swing of the story.

can you please fasten the story development and fixe the da*n MC mentality