Heaven's Intention - Reviews

Mage is another long-range damage dealer, though they do not have the range of the hunter nor the hawk eye or the snipe, the attack is unbelievable if a mage can keep their distance from the enemy they can virtually kill anyone in the game

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You'll never shine if you don't glow

So far is very interesting. Love a strong FL that gets things done… waiting for more ?

I've read quite a few rune stories and I quite like this one

Systems and Sex - if that's what you're looking for, you found it :DOn a serious note, the writing is clear and easy to follow, with a nice flow. System elements are a little heavy for my personal tastes, but appropriate for a litrpg. It feels like the MC is always down for some void sex (several sexualized encounters as of chapter 20) so I would consider that to be a primary facet/draw for readers. It takes a while for other characters to be introduced, but the story starts to open up more around ch18. The world is well-fleshed out and action scenes are easy to envision.

This is a well-written story overall, though it starts with some cliché elements. The character abilities have creative names, but I don't quite like how their powers don't match with the names. After merging the spirit eyes, it feels like his status downgraded with only fancy names added . The story has only recently started, but it's moderately enjoyable so far.