The Grammer is really bad! Also the where is the world background? This is a really bad novel you should stay away for your happiness! The MC is really retarded as well! He must have a lot of blood to get all those nose bleeds in one day and survive! All and all good premise but terrible after that!
Okay I have read just the few chapters and let me say it is not dissapointing and it is actually Great. Contrary to what you would expect, it isnt one of those less detailed and very slow paced type of novels. Although it is slow paced its not "THAT" slow and you can actually feel the story progress as long as you give it time, it also contains more detail compared to the regular stories that have a fast pace which helps the story progress smoothly. So this is just my first part of review and I will change it later. See you guys again
I never seen any novel that as detail as this even though some of the story is inspired by other but still not to concentrated on that part. anyway i just wanted to say i love this book and keep ip the work.
"Err, Ruby ... Do you wanted to be my friend?" Said Mei while playing her fingers. "Well, I felt pity when I always seeing you alone. When you're friend with me, you were not feeling alone." Said Mei with happily.
That's all for now. I'll keep you updated on my progress—or lack thereof. Until next time, stay awesome, and remember: if all else fails, just blame it on the mana.
