He Beat Up The Alpha - Reviews

He Beat Up The Alpha
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Gonna finish it this month, not much lefttt
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I can’t handle the updates you have me too hooked I need to finish the book lol ....
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Great story! How long is the story and how often do you update??
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Well there be an update soon? Don’t leaving us hanging!
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best bl I have ever seen! I can't wait to read more omg!
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Hey guys, don’t know if you are here yet, but I really love this short story. Hope you will have fun here!
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Good story line but last update was almost 3 months ago…when is the next update going to happen or the second story????
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It could have done better. The whole point of harem genre is to grab beauties. I felt like the aithor started out great and then grew muddle headed. Maybe he was trying to attract a different wave of readers but why introduce a fem. Char as being super beautiful only to ignore her and walk away.

Point of Gilbert the lewd dragon was just ??? Teaching him a yin technique that can go awry if he doesn't control himself. Small things like MC being able to clear Bellinda's birthmark but it going nowhere.
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i'll start reading this. i hope it has good action. that's all i'm asking.

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