Harry Potter The Legion Born - Reviews

But Jordan.. he was the only one who could infuriate her! She didn't know how or why he could turmoil her closely guarded emotions! She hated him.. She hated him from the pits of her inner self!!

Kakashi looked at his former sensei blankly. "I'm not talking about that. It's just-" He shook his head in disbelief. "Why? What were youthinking, sensei?"

"Someone worked from the inside...," Sasuke finished. "There was someone who worked from inside and prevented Konoha Ninja from coming to aid us!" He said in a tone of realization.

I hunted down some zombies become I went home. I had obtained some decayed tooth which I forced myself to pick up and I have also gotten some soul stone.

"Enough Clarissa!" The principal bellows, his face pale as a white-out. "And here I thought you'd be going without a fuss. You're even including me in your scheme!" He turns rapidly to the men in black. "She's talking nonsense, don't believe her. And take her, now please!"

After hearing that, Viltus immediately looks at the calendar. He soon says,

Mola reversed his vehicle and stopped right beside the hapless creature lying on the curb and alighted quickly. The sight that met him was not a pleasant one. The girl was bruised in so many places and covered in her own blood. She seemed dead but without even checking Mola could see a vein pulsing beneath the skin of her neck. Nonetheless, he checked and confirmed that she was alive. He lifted her up gently, careful not to cause anymore harm to her, and laid her down in the backseat of his car. His shirt was already stained in her blood as he sat in the driver's seat and drove away from the scene.

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❝He is a hopeful soul condemned to live in a mortal's world,❞ The older woman sighed, just taking notice of the hazel irises shyly peeking from the slightly opened door of their quarters. ❝I see you in the comforts of the shadows yet again, Fausta.❞

So let's get some of the biggest stuff out of the way. Within 50 chapters our MC is OP. If you like that kind of thing, that's fine. For me, I like a slow burn. If by chapter 50 I have a character throwing around literally millions of coins to buy any solutions to problems that come their way, even to the point of resisting a holy nuke, that's going to be a drop for me. I've only gotten to chapter 50. Apparently from the other reviews it eventually becomes a novel of just stomping big bads on other planets and dimensions. Even though all the worlds are converging on Earth? I dunno. Let's get to the meat of this review. Gammer and mistakes sometimes take me out of it, but I can ignore a lot of it. The story feels like a mix of a bunch of reincarnation/apocalypse novels. Again, not a deal breaker. I'm really sad about the unique twist that has kinda fallen by the wayside. Apparently, fallen angels (the main antagonist) have recruited large swaths of humanity to betray their kind for power and have them cement their power over humanity. This is why humanity is very weak in the future. Great twist, love it. But we already have an item that can find traitors easily. Even it's drawback is negated because our MC can just spend coins to solve it. So, no need to worry. This is why I've rated the story development so low because. Already we've tossed out a big challenge for our MC. Not even death can pose a problem, because our MC literally just bought extra lives. And can do so whenever they want. As for character design, MC is pretty bland. A step above some of the worst I've read, but quickly becoming the 'smartest, most handsome, strongest' man and that's it. Again, if you like that, this story is for you. Just not for me. Now, if you want a story to be able to sink your teeth in, no worries. There's TONS of content. That's a positive of this story. But at the end of the day, it's just another OP MC with no depth to them defeating the apocalypse with a wave of their hand while the girls swoon. Oh, and with a few slurs thrown in. Because of course.

hope it interesting for the viewers. ...