Hi author here sweeties. Please read, vote and comment. I'm giving five stars because of arrogance but I want to put out a good start. Otherwise you can give me feedbacks positive or negative. I will try to include them in my books if I find them reasonable...
I love the story, there were some grammatical issues and occasional inconsistencies. I felt like the last two or three chapters were rushed and we missed some scenes that were mentioned, but otherwise, beautiful story and I love the characters.
