Glossary for Various Novels - Reviews

Eun Young couldn't help but let out a sigh. Her friendly son's at it again. He's off to making new friends--with foreigners at that! He knows a few English phrases here and there and surely, communicating won't be an issue with him. It's just that seeing him with his jolly and extrovert personality was really cute and charming!

The next thing he knew, he had arrived in front of the towering doorway before he realized that he could not move anymore and stopped to see what was blocking him.

Hello there! So this week, I decided that I will be answering all the burning questions. That means there will be spoilers as well. So if you are not comfortable with the spoilers, please wait for next chapter.

"well, It started like this...."

"You owe us now!" Lucas said, following his sister through the maze.

He slams his drink on the table. "You take that back. Do you have any idea what you did to Tai? He fell apart. You can blame yourself for how close they became. Summer had to take care of Yang with how messed up Tai was. You have no right to talk if you don't even intend to come home."

'Is this what it feels like to have a family?'

Eye.

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Writing quality isn't bad, but after many chapters where the author repeats paragraphs sometimes even twice in the same chapter is questionable as it is frequent even withing first 70 chapters.   I will admit author does a good job with gender pronouns so that is a plus.  Character development is lack luster as author makes the MC ask the blatantly obvious stupid question like a child so they can explain something easy to understand. (my example "That is a jumping frog".  "what is that?"  "it is a frog that jumps".    All it takes is a few sentences written differently to add IQ points to the MC..  CH 70 - 71 this is painfully demonstrated.This causes the story development to just degrade any confidence in the MC.

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

the starting is just pure garbage, the mc became heartless immediately the system activated