Your writing quality has improved but not much as it was good from the start and the updates are regular from the start the story development is pretty good and looking impressive, hooking storyline. Character design is good so far as it is work in progress and last but not least the world background is still pretty much same as ours but not quite the same so I'm hoping that the world background or at least the world around the mc is explained in the coming chapters. overall its a good novel.
