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Nakita ko ang mga linya na nakita ko sa panaginip ko. May linya na gumuguhit sa kapatid ko

Not paying attention to the guards, TEO slipped his hands into his sleeves to pretend he was looking for the money and went into a dimmension and took out a gold coin and threw it at the guards then entered the city.

"Ha, of course not! I will just place it here in your table." I nodded when I noticed how he sighed and placed it nicely on my desk. My fingers acted immediately and brushed off the remaining petals, leaf and some brown fragments on his Italian suit. I smiled up to him and surprised him with a kiss on his cheek. I left my lips linger on him for a while and leaned back

"I just need to be alone, I can go tomorrow"

Interesting story from the beginning. I loved the four coffins?????! How did you even think of that??!

Please add more lemons with detailed information.

Writing and premise isn’t bad and you can feel the care author put into it. Even though this genre isn’t made for me, if you like the tags and tropes this novel displays, I think you should give it a try.

Just don't elongate some things too much.And make some plots more believable.