THİS NOVEL İS SO GOOD. hmm i dont like unemotional mc's but i like that mc because. he is emotional but cant show it. 1 i think mc needs a rival equal to him(rival should be same age as mc)(he can be like son of life or something like that ahadshahahahha)2 İ think you should not give superabundant powers to mc You may find it difficult to control.3 AND MOST İMPORTANT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE describe characters.i cant remember the character you introduced to me 100 chapters ago4 and i think you act like we can see what you dreamed of when you writing. you should describe places to us 5 dont missunderstand me this is one of best novels i have ever read so i dont want it go bad. i just write what i want to see.AND MOST İMPORTANT THİNGİ LOVE YOU PLEASE PLEASE MOST CHAPTERS(SORRY FOR BAD ENGLAND)