Four times I've died, the fifth was intentional - Reviews

Cengiran lebar khas Khuma membuat Fathan mengurungkan niatnya untuk merajuk.

That's when Ottar noticed something… be was caged in.

"hehehe, im sory im sory, yes.. you ride the wrong one, i dont know who tell you this route you sould take number 32 bus"

Is there gonna be an update soon or did you just dropped it?

His bone made another sickly crunch. Some that doesn't break, bend in the wrong direction.

"I wanted to keep them safe so the animals wouldn't take them!"

The emperor, nodding in delight, odered to the eunuch of etiquette: "Take down her name."

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Steve, who was running along the streets as he raised his shield to block an incoming energy blast, said, "Naruto, evacuate as many people as you can, now!" Throwing his shield at the Sentry who'd fired at him, he anticipated where the shield would bounce into his arms. Catching the vibranium disk as it ricocheted off three Sentries, deactivating all of them, he barrel rolled behind some cover.

This is the definition of perfect in my words

Writing is fantastic and the story is so engaging! Such a creative premise! Love the characters and will simp expeditiously ?? 10/10!

At the start it was a bit rough, the world building and character design was great, but the writing was bit off and sometimes there wasn’t enough context. As the story continues though it improves a lot. I like the current style waayy better, and I think the pacing is great too, it did also feel a little slow in the beginning but its perfect now, wish the chapter release rate was higher, but if that means the quality will drop im fine with how it is. I love dark fantasies, with eldritch lovecraftian elements, this is great, what a gem keep up the work author??