Former Ice Princess - Reviews

"That would be me," Amrynn nodded in confirmation. "How have you been, Eldred?"

"Well, for now, she is on her way to the class. You can go back to your class, let's meet again after that." Hwang Jaejin waved his hand dismissively.

"Ogyaaaa! Ogyaaaa!"

"She's the daughter of a detective. Maybe she could sleuth a way out of this place. You'll find the door you went through won't open again, and it took years for me to open with the help of another kid." Ford looked down a bit disappointed in himself. He felt guilty. This person, clinging to life, had a way out. And Ford closed it off, only to be stuck there with them.

Tara. Teman Gea satu-satunya yang ada di kantor ini. Gea mengenalnya saat makan siang untuk pertama kalinya di kantin perusahaan ini. Tara tiba-tiba saja mendatanginya dengan senyum sumringah dan berceloteh ini itu mengenai tabiat orang-orang yang ada di perusahaan ini. Gea hanya tersenyum sambil mendengarkan.

While Joel and I were going on and on about his worry, a loud sound came off. Yh it's a ringtone of a phone. Everyone in the hall turned to look at the owner of that phone. It's Stephen and he was standing close to Joel and I. He picked his phone and answered the call. After some time he frowned and we knew there is something wrong but what could possibly go wrong after such a wonderful show. Stephen walk away from as so we could not hear what he and the person on the line talked about. The crew members started packing and putting the place back in order.

"maybe I will arrived  at DawnTown in a few hour but.... I'm to tired because I've change my stat and I'm hungry, I doesn't  eat anything since I arrived at this world"he said again

the story had a very nice beginning but somewhere in between it just kinda started to get boring. the plot is without a doubt unique andhas its charms but the story had a lot of plotholes.

very interesting story, i want more chapters.waiting....

Author here. just want to point out that my novel has many issues but i plan to keep improving. if you see any area that i could do better, feel free to tell me, either here or in my discord linked in the synopsis.

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This is the author speaking Guys this is my first time writing something Please review the work and tell me how to improve Thanks.......??