Forbidden Desires: A Targaryen Tale - Reviews

Every chapter keeps me coming back for more

Great prose and of course a popular isekai theme was chosen for this novel. So, gaining readers in WN shouldn't be a problem at all. The story developed well within the first 13 chapters and we can see how the ML evolved throughout the progress. Waiting to see more action. Good job, bro!

as I walked in I spotted naruto  snoring in  the pellow with a little bit of drool  

"Why do you ca—" one of them started, but the other guy cut him off and said.

"Alright then, if you're still worried then…"

However, little did the researchers know that a code with a higher potential for growth would have to sacrifice something in return.

She places her arms out close to her and I slowly start. I let go slowly at first then at times spikes drops. 10 pounds, 30, 50, 100, 300, 350, 400, 600, 650 here is where I see her start to struggle a little. 700 pounds, 720, 750, 800, 820. "Okay! I can't hold it anymore!" I quickly lift it up and then place it on the floor. Rosy excitedly looks at me, "How much was that 100 pounds? 200?" I look at her. "Is that how much it felt to you?" She looks dubiously at me. "That is how much I could lift before max. It felt about that much." I smile at her so she hasn't really noticed even the simplest improvements. I guess her strength increments were slow enough she didn't notice. "You carried approximately eight hundred and twenty pounds." Her jaw slacks open and she looks at me into my eyes, "Whaaat?!"

"You have a deal." He said solemnly. "So who has been stealing from me and betraying our trust?"

"I never knew Embry had a girlfriend" I said,

And all that glitters is gold

beautifully written I am enjoying reading it

Great novel, the only bad thing was the rushed ending, it was really sudden, the mc was exploring some secrects and boom the ending in 2 or 3 chapters.