For Her... - Reviews

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Alright, I have read 5 chapters so far and it seems interesting. Naturally it helps to know that this is the author of GREED which I like very much. Also the "power system" or well the glimpse that we were allowed to see seems rather interesting. Fans being power (at least temporary power) is rather unique. At least I haven't seen that anywhere I think. If I have then it wasn't very memorable. It also brings a unique perspective on the hero/villain world building where an awakened is either a hero or a villain (in society) depending on both their ability and personality. Since fans are power and Heroes have fans this could really make for interesting situations and characters. So I'm excited. One thing that I hope you do better than in GREED is the placement of the pay wall. I think that it was just too early in GREED. Or well at least considering how you wrote the beginning it was too early. I think more people would have been interested if the free chapters started later. I don't know how much control an author has over that or if its webnovel that has a say in it. However I think that you should carefully consider where to put it here.

The story is great with everything, the MC is a bit cocky but anyone with that much power would be so pretty realistic, the world building is also quite good. the only bad thing is the fights lasting a dozen chapters each and while some are entertaining, most just feel too stretched out.

It has a good start, Writing isn’t bad either.

I'd this a bl??? Please reply guys I don't want to read a bl novel because it feels like it is