Fell Deeds - Reviews

And the greatest enemy of pirates, are actually other pirates. The marines are just secondary.

A steel fork flew straight at him!

Seeing this sudden change in the military some of the people tried asking the officers if there is anything wrong but the officers seem to not given any proper reply and sent all the people back to there vehicle. Seeing this I taught I might find something on the internet I search for anything major that happened in the last couple of hours. As I taught 5 minutes before a video post from Facebook has gone viral and started making huge waves on the net.

The other Devil saw in shock how the blood of his partner, that was flowing through the air, became solid and formed a spear that was directed at him. And at the same time he realized that he couldn't move from his place. He used his energy to shield himself and the makeshift weapon didn´t cause any real damage.

Updating Stability is great. 7 chaps almost a week, but I personally think you should post 21 chaps a week.Translation Quality is fabulous. Although, you mentioned that English isn't your native language, I haven't spotted a single mistake yet (hope it doesn't change).Story Development is a bit slow but, I think it's because it's still in the initial stages, but I like it this way.Character Design is fantastic. Especially, Alice Lee's. Oh my god! She is outstanding!World Background, from what I've read this far you are planning to expand it slowly. Take your time. So long, as you can, work on some improvements, this novel will one day stand on top of all novels!

VERY INTERESTING SO FAR, LOOKING FORWARD TO FUTURE CHAPTERS!

I really love this story and I can't wait for more update on this.

I know you're new, but it's refreshing to get this type of action vibe. and dang, Asher is a monstrosity

This is pretty good if you're here to laugh or just pass the time, well since it caught my humor I'll give it a 8/10.