A slice-of-life story... with a twist! The charas are well-developed, and each of them shows their unique traits.Just in case if readers are confused, there'll be some scenes in different POV. That'll explain the 'repetitive' phase due to them being on the same page, but different point of views.And the more you read it, the more funnier this one persona is.You'll see in the middle of the story.And a brief of dramatic approach behind the past or the scene, makes us really want to embrace each of the charas. Overall, good work author. ?
