The plot is interesting, and the drama up to now didn’t drag. However, the content is unreadable due to the massive grammatical errors with word choice, punctuation, and sentence structure. Some paragraphs end with ellipses, whereas others don’t have periods. It’s like a confusing stream of consciousness. The author states that she updated the story via her phone, which explains the numbers in place of letters. If an editor or proofreader helps, the book would be worth the money.
