Everything is Simple

It’s a decent story but needs a good English editor to make reading less frustrating. I think I will scream if I read: “nevertheless” or “needles to say” one more time. They are excessively overused and not always used correctly.

Good Story!

Kahit ako siguro yung nasa sitwasyon ni Yrah, macucurious din ako sa kung sino talaga si Gresso kasi he has these attractive but dangerous eyes, don palang mafifeel mo ng he has a good side parin. Kahit natatakot si Yrah noong una niyang nakita si Gresso, she still see the good soul of him.