The author does a good job of plunging the MC into a quick paced situation, letting the readers quickly immerse themselves in the world.It has an interesting plot and a good integration of a system that allows the main character to progress.With improvements to the overall writing quality, I think the story could easily be rated higher. I hope that is the case going forward because I like the premise of the story.Overall, well done author. All that’s mainly required are some touch ups on the writing to make it cleaner and flow smoothly.