Entwined: Mated to three Alphas - Reviews

Starts alright, interesting for a while, grammar sucks but sadly I've gotten used to it using this app. After a while chapters are repeated with little to no change for no reason and the plot gets lost after like chapter 55 or something. Then random unrelated story takes over, dafuk is writer on????

This story starts off decent in the first few chapters, then completely changes. After the first couple of chapters the writing and grammar falls to pieces. The language is very broken and poor and I just couldn't continue to read along with it. Disappointing.

Don't waste time/money on this book. The story starts off ok, but then chapters get repeated multiple times throughout the book and other stories are added in with random characters that don't make any sense. The original story line never really gets finished either. Horrible experience.

Sasuga Rimuru sama!

Dropped or dropped translation?
Great gem.. too sad.

Is it luo yungchang, if so I will just drop it because she is such a bland character. I am hoping it is someome better and the romance is properly thought out.

T H EㅤP L O TㅤT H I C K E N S ❗

I read this to get smutty but g*dd*mn this novel got some heavy plotting in it. It starts like it was a wish-fulfilment novel but gets better around 30-50 chaps, when Mykel Alester (our MC) starts to mess around with Gods and also starts laying down his plans to screw over the Protag of his novel. After that it just keeps diving deeper into the PLOT to the point that even after 400+ chaps there's still twists & surprises waiting. No plotholes. No Plot-armor. Cunning MC. Climax is hype.

I love the characters & interactions in this novel. I wish i could forget this, so i could enjoy it again.

Nice story but way to rushed and too many grammatical errors.
I was very disappointed with the ending....I would have liked to read about Arianna and Jace's wedding...it would have been nice if it ended after the baby was born so they could have finally given Eli the baby he so desperately wanted.

If I'm being completely honest, I would probably be far worse in my grammar as a native English speaker, so showing some grace & respect is of the utmost importance as Jennifer works hard to bring Laika and Karim to life for the reader. I hope she continues with many more stories or spin-offs.