El Contraataque de la Madrastra: Criando a un Niño en una Época Pasada - Reviews

Great story, just a few problems with grammar and spelling but overall I'm enjoying the story. Looking forward to what happens next. . . keep on updating and I'll keep on reading

Gonna make a proper review later. Coz, webnovel doesn't allow me to make a review with no words ????.

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Here's my opinion of this novel. it started out fine, the character building wasn't very bad, and the world building was good too and I enjoyed the beginning. But then the MC became "Bipolar" what he does and what he says, keep jumping all over the place.Sometimes doesn't even make sense and the comedy skits, becomes cringeworthy. I mean, If you're 10 years old you might like it.. which isn't realistic as this is an 18+ novel, but me as an adult, I can't. So the big question is, who is the target audience for this novel?. Idk.. This is just my opinion/review Writing Quality - 3/5SOF - 5/5Story Dev - 2/5Character Design - 3/5World background - 4/5Overall 3.4/5

I like it a lot. Its quite complicated meaning that there is clearly some thought put behind it. The writing quality is good and its updating fast. The only thing I find a bit meh is that sometimes it feels like the protag acts more on his fun and pleasure than what could be beneficial to him. Like thinking with his D instead of brain. Of course this isn't something big and its not like it happened a lot. So all in all, a good novel.

"Ayolah, itu tidak terlalu buruk. Tapi aku akan mengatakan buku lebih baik daripada film" kataku menjaga monster hijau itu terkunci jauh di dalam.

"Sorry." she says.  "We're here."

"Hey! I'm talking to you! Don't you turn your back on me!" I shouted at him.

"Orik, come and eat." The voice was stern and unyielding.

sky: I wont try and it wont be easy

"Kenapa kamu yang datang,Dion.Kau bahkan menggunakan identitas Dr Henry."

The next few seconds rob me of the chance to formulate a plan. The woman named Alexandria Atlasz turns around and tackles me back into my prison, dragging me back towards the 'dungeon.' At first I thought she changed her mind and was going to kill me.