Dungeon of the Dark Wilds - Reviews

Ryota: "Yuuichi.. you should try to spend time with your Sister... cause in 1 days, you are about to attend Starlight Academy in the Kiyoshimay City"

"Rex then threw the Lightning infused dagger at the pirate in the leg and shocked him so he could not move" You'll now serve as my target practice "He said as he threw constant wind blades at his body making the pirate scream in agony and beg for mercy however Rex was not going to let him die peacefully so he quickly move behind him grabbed his skull and lifted him up as he said" Die you bitch "And activate Lightning palms simultaneously frying his brain and instantly killing him."

"where's the rings?"

This novel is developing into something possibly great. The character interactions are realistic and lovely, descriptions are vivid but can be a bit much at times and lately the update stability has been good. I only wish for the story to develop like this and the updates to continue happening.

An interesting read, not gonna lie I quite enjoyed it. While there are some mistakes in your spelling and grammar here and there, the overall story is still very much enjoyable.A few tips so you can grow. :)The synopsis is one of the most important element of your novel. It is imperative that it is perfect, without any spelling mistakes. :)

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