Dual Nature - A Harry Potter/Percy Jackson crossover - Reviews

He was a balding man with his brown hair turning white. He also had put on a few pounds the last time I saw him. Even though I was examining his body, all I could think about was how to break it.

Class C      (Bronze)

"Yeah I would be surprised too."

"The two gentlemen here want credit." She said.

As the trio came down stairs heading towards the dining room.

Commanders and leaders

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

Bearing the pain, focusing only to my objective. My eyes took a peek by the side of my crumbled defense. My eyes widened, he's coming for another blow. Curses! I can't take another hit like this. He's coming fast. My mind already calculated, I'm not gonna be able to dodge it in time. Knowing this, I resorted to my fate and stood straight like a brave knight with high hopes that I survive this impact.

"Oh yeah, Kaenjieeeeee!" i answered with a smile.

nice one. although not the best it's still better than many others.

I am not a native English speaker, if you find any errors or have any feedback suggestions, please let me know!

I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait for a new chapter!My favorite character is Elena, because of the longing Castin has for her and it reminds me of a love long lost in my own life.When the Rat King's whiskers caressed Castin's cheeks, and they both squelched, I felt a shiver run down my spine.I never would have expected he would use his skull as a beer mug, that came totally out of nowhere!Keep going, I love it!