i already loved the introduction! the writing style is entirely understandable and ready to read with a touch of humor and there that perfectly describes the main character's thoughts. i think the flow as well is not too fast, not too slow, which is a perfect balance because the story itself is already good so we get more hooked. the system is also really unique, but not difficult to grasp. its suited for many young male readers (or females too). keep it up, author!
