Dragon Soaring Through The Heavens

The storyline is awesome but the grammar and spelling need work. I would reread the paragraphs a couple of times, so I can understand what the author is trying to interpret. Other than that a good read.

[1] paper tiger - a person or thing that appears threatening but is ineffectual. It means that he looks intimidating, but is no actual threat. [all bark and no bite.]

The Paravel Embassy had started with two squads of watchmen outside. The sergeants after some discussion, decided to pass the buck up the chain, and requested the duty lieutenant along with another squad so they could keep watch over the whole compound in shifts.