P.S - I still haven't forgotten about all of my previous novels, and just as I've said before sooner or later I'll put aside enough time to finish them one by one.
This novel might have some mistakes and may sometimes have some of the most unrealistic situations happen. But all I got to say is give it a chance and if you like it continue to read it. I'll also try to keep up with chapter uploads but don't count on me for that. and I'll also not give myself a shameless 5 stars and will show my genuine thoughts on my own novel.
Hmm good fairy tail type novel, although I don't like this genre too much, but your plots and writing style is good to make many readers hook, if they read it carefully, I will put your book into my library to read when I'm free.
Looks like an interesting start to a great novel! I'm looking forward to see where it goes - the scene is beautifully set, and the world is incredible!