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Translation Quality - Decent from what I can tell from first impressions.Stability of Updates - Not sure yet, will wait until it is picked.Story Development - It feels like the author has taken a lot of inspiration from Pokemon, but set the story in a real world setting. From my initial read it feels like the story is well paced, by which it takes months rather than days for the MC to become powerful (But he still isn't the best even with the system).Character Design - The characters are quite refreshing when compared to some of the cliches that appear on this website. However, this story can feel like a Pokemon fan-fiction at some points. For example, the author uses different names but similar descriptions for the various Sprites, which can come across as weird and overly-long to read at times.World Background - From what I can tell it has a slice of life feel to it and the various places visited are appropriately described. The main setting so far involves school and the city, with the various other countries and organisations that are explained early on.  Overall, a decent read but it would feel easier to read if the Sprite names were shortened to something more manageable (Just a personal Preference).

This book looked promising. I like the element in which the novel protray. It's not food per say and it's not too bad. the grammar need to be improved a little.

Good novel but it's frustrating sometimes. The villains always manage to escape because mc is too forgiving which creates problems for him and his family. Once or twice i can understand but keeps on happening again and again. It's become frustrating now.

Hands up  Clouds open  Light above your hands A book ....falls into your hands  Angels sing Cause you just witnessed the revival of xue ying. FINALLY GOD FCKING DAMMIT WHY THE FCK DID YOU TAKE SO MUCH TIME IM WAITING FOR THIS SERIES LIKE 6 MONTHS IF THIS ISN'T RELEASED WITH 100 CHAPTERS EXTRA THEN IM QUITING QIDIAN FOR LYFE!!!

Wow, there's a lot to process from the first chapter. It's action packed and filled with comedy. Screaming for his mummy, really? The author has a great sense of humor, I'll give him that.The transitioning was smooth. I easily understood the way the game gave Leona rewards for various successful attacks on the succubus queen with thick makeup.My only critique was the way the author used the third pov when trying to introduce us to the "Hendra" character. Isiriana was described perfectly and so was Leona. Towards the end, the narration of Leona beating Isiriana was great and all but earlier in the fight when Hendra was struck by her nightmare powers, it wasn't explained properly.I had a hard time understanding what exactly was going on.Overall, great execution of the world background.Keep it up, author.

It's a very good novel with great potential, really hope you will continue it and not neglect it. Good luck                                                  

Very good story. At the beginning a bit slow paced but gets better.Writing quality and grammar are perfect.Updates are stable until now, hope it stays like that.

The worst problem with this story is the MC. Everything that comes out of his mouth is either Chuuni cringe or just plain stupid. It's so bad that I've decided to stop reading. He's so dumb that it makes me ashamed to be a human.

Great Book, nice Chapters and good Writing. I am in need of more xDI hope this is Story that will continue for a longer time and i am able to read a great adventure.

"Danzo explain now!" The Third Hokage bellowed. At that several Anbu appeared in the room. At a glance, it looked like 20 or so. With at least 15 other Jonin. The weird part was the Grass village group was also here.

"Well, no ma'am I haven't-" He got cut off as she started speaking again. Satan just shut his mouth, reminding himself where exactly he was.

"Really?" asked Namjoon who was already sitting in the car.