Diary of Alison Rose : complex girl - Reviews

It's story does have potential but i'm at 100 chapter and so far I can say authors just wastes words to complete its little plot like we used do when we used to write essay on any topic and we don't know much about it so we go round and round around same point for one page same here but with each chapter at its so much frustrating with POV of each character of that event

it's a good book for you and your family

Eldred gagged. "First, your magic is so powerful that it can render people unconscious and now we find out that you were following us and listening to our private conversations-."

"My guess is, they'll do it without exposing their identity. What I suggest, is for us to wait patiently for some anomaly to happen, and we'll be ready for response at moments notice. When we're out, I'll help you identify the two people." Walter finished his explanation and put down his tied up hands.

He froze immediately he saw the guy.

"MALFOY? Bloody Malfoy wants to marry me?" he needed air, he needed to breath and think and get the fuck out of here.

Hippolyta was Alarmed a mortal man wishing to challenge the god of war into battle is just plain suicide! she must go now before something happens to the goddess mate, she then said in a hurried tone [We must find your mate now!! Ares is not to be trifled with! a man challenging a god is suicide come on we must save him!].

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Then Mike went around the port gathering information. He found out that there was a shipyard some distance away from the port where the marines repaired their ships. It was his best bet so he went there after eating some food from a stall.

I re-read this and saw how bad I wrote this that's why I'll rewrite everything .

INTENNSEEE!!! well-crafted fantasy with rich worldbuilding and high stakes. The lore is deep, the action scenes are gripping, and the protagonist’s journey is emotionally compelling. However, the pacing drags at the start, and some side characters could be more developed. Once it picks up, though, it really delivers. If you love high-stakes fantasy with vivid battles and deep mysteries, this is worth the read.