Descent into Damnation - Reviews

Commander Samantha Weller, six feet tall, long raven black hair and bright green eyes, toned with the right amount of curves, thirty three years old, the very embodiment of why the GU gets fucked, a hardcore pacifist that calls out for peace even when he people die, in other words a true coward scared to get her hands dirty, and also second in command in the Horizon.

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The hero, stood on his feet, with his face tainted with blood, multiple scars in his body and armor. His eyes glowed red from the nonstop fighting and adrenaline.

"Of course" Naruto said.

Jimin:"wait!! Where??"

Author is still new, and I advise him to use word to speech tools to proofread his work, it will really help him improve

Is it weird that I'm in love with my own book?  Dang, I enjoy reading it over and over again even more than I enjoyed writing it. Coming from the author, I can tell you, this is not just your average office romance...it's way more ;-)

so far I'm loving the story. i can always go for a good reincarnation. hehe. maybe it might turn out to be like that time I got reincarnated as a slime

This is superb. the story outline is intriguing.