Alright, I hope this review will be long enough. So far, the story's going well and the characters seem to be developing at their own pace. We already have numerous antagonists and protagonists at this point wherein I can see the potential for each one. Now what I can say is that you've done well so far, but to keep it THIS good? Things are about to get harder as I HAVE tried writing a novel before but failed completely. So good luck and try your best, I'll be here. Waiting for more. And more.
