Just wow! Pretty good writing and efforts. Fantastic world built and characters. Got hooked at the first chapter itself. Greed is a lovely character!. Though I suggest to keep each chapter length between 1000-1500 for better flow and consistency.
I really liked the genre the author adapted. Putting high hopes in this new novel!! yippee! ? a lil typos though but, we can definitely overlook it!!! All the best Author! FEED US MORE!!
