Dark Warlock in the Apocalypse - Reviews

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The sword beamed. An unparalleled sword beam traveled together with the power to crush anything in its path towards the Fakanra from this seemingly small elf.

until their lower half show up and then he closed the gate at them

|like my new boyfriend Liu Mang. He         |

Oh tiens du français sur ce site, ça fait plaisir ! Bon par contre le texte est blindé de fautes, c'est malheureux mais ça la lecture assez difficile :x Tu pourrais peut-être étoffer ton style aussi parce que là... ça fait un peu trop brut et simple.Ça viendra sûrement avec l'expérience, bon courage !

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this other than the Author? Let me be the first among your readers to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???

Overall it's good. No grammatical error that I notice, the chapter length is passable, the chapter release is constant so for me it's ok ?