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Dance Till I Die
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Deskripsi: Kemampuan yang memungkinkan Anda untuk memahami konsep pada tingkat naluriah daripada teoritis.Mengizinkan penggunaan konsep di luar pemahaman Anda berdasarkan insting.(50 bonus INT dasar)
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In the outpost which was floating, there was a whole army base with manned guns, defensive protocols and a castle like structure deep within. There was no one in sight as Tori and Lexi stood outside the formation. 'So, are you not worried about Jin?' Lexi asked trying to understand what they were doing there. 'I am, that's why we're here. Take this Lexi.' Tori said handing a small rectangular thumb drive to Lexi. 'Whats this Tori, is it a super secret weapon that we'd use to take out this whole army and blow up the base?' Lexi asked anticipation clear in her purple eyes as sparks of lightning were given off. 'you could put it that way.' The masked girl replied giggling. 'so what is it called?' Lexi asked her face close as if listening to a secret. 'Flash-Drive' Tori replied giggling. 'huh are you making fun of me? So its just a flash drive? Boring. What's next are we not going to fight?' She asked as a sudden feeling of regret for going there washed over her. I would prefer if you don't, we aren't enemies yet.' Tori replied looking at Lexi with her golden pupils. 'oh, golden pupils, fate! This means we will be enemies, muahahaha ok I'll let it go for now cause knowing you it'd be more fun later. So what am I to do with this flash drive?' Lexi seemed to enjoy conflict and anticipated war with this 'alien' entity. 'you slot it in the mainframe for five minutes and you let it do its thing, I imbued it with devourer mana.' Tori responded and Lexi was staring at the flash drive as if she wanted to take it apart and understand it. Devourer as the name implies means to eat whatever the wielder wishes. In this case since the flash was imbued with that magic, it was clearly going to eat all the information on the base's mainframe. 'oh I like it. An army with no information is a crippled one. Allow me to find the mainframe.' Lexi said as she closed her eyes following the electricity routes routes, sieving out devices sensing the hidden guards. As Lexi was focused she didn't notice that Tori had used 'Devourer' on her erasing her aura completely. 'I'll be right back.' Lexi said and and vanished deep into the army base. 'mm, I'll distract them.' Tori responded and stepped into the defensive formation.
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and... the flash aka barry allen  speed force?   
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As an author of this novel, I had to follow the tradition and leave my review here. this novel is brand new, and the ideas I got when writing them is flowing smoothly. the adult scene, to me, is quite good. anyway do enjoy the new story. someone asked me if i was asian, yes i am, i am southasian, that should be enough answer for now.

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