Convectus: The Search Begins

This Novel is actually Great. But, MC can be called the First one amongst Earthling or People from Earth entering into this Dust World(Another World) with his can be called Over Power system, but MC growth is only 20-30% Faster than the other and also his fighting strength is also not much bigger than other people Which is only have 1 or 2 Power only while MC have more. MC is having System but cannot strike down someone whose only have Pyro or Fire abilities ain't he being so weak?

This novel in my opinion is good but what I hate is where the author keep using the same sentences with different word in every paragraph just to make it seem longer.

If the author ever sees this, you have written a dumbf.u.c.k novel of proportions I have ever seen. From Lucas kicked around even after become a “god of war” and giving his enemies more chances to hurt him even though he should be smart enough to just kill them, having a status he doesn’t even mention to his wife for no reason mentioned, to writing her into cooperating with the same family that abused her, there might be a reason, but I’m not reading to find out. I’m tempted to get ahold of this author and curse his reasoning in continuing  to write this novel. And I feel sorry for the people translating this novel.

so far damn good story I am loving the shit outta this book thank you and keep em up ......