Broken Within - Reviews

What person doesn't like a Pizza?A weirdough!Hahahahhahahah..... You will be A weirdough too if you won't like this novel! Kidding...... the novel is good as always. Des always has the quality in her novels! You guys should give it a try!

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I can't understand one thing is the writer's time worthless or Ours. Nearly in every chapter you get to see his full status, sometimes twice in same chapter. Writer don't you have your brain just for some point increase you write whole status window,  who like to read same thing several times and also so detailed explanation about hunts and xp gain. It's a novel focus on story not numbers. Don't waste our time keep it short and simple.About the story its slow paced after reading nearly 100s of chpts my personal opinion writer is wasting words just to increase number no need for so much elaborations. Hope latter chapters are good.

A blinding light invaded as Alan opened his eyes. Once his eyes had adjusted to his surroundings, the first thing he saw was a grand glass window, filling the room around him with light. A small chest of drawers sat against the wall, and Alan himself lay on a massive circular bed in the middle of the room. It really was a massive bed, it could fit 50 people comfortably. Alan felt slightly lonely in the middle of the enormous mattress, but it passed quickly as he inspected it. The bed was set into the floor, so that it was like a swimming pool of fluff and comfort. Alan was delighted to discover that he could gather all the pillows together and jump into them comfortably.

I scanned the room again, looking for the familiar boy. A frown settled on my lips as I caught no sight of him. I turned around and headed for the kitchen to get a drink. I opened the door and looked up, stopping in my tracks as the door closed behind me.

[Halfway up the mountain]

Shaya también detectó el objetivo. "No te apresures a matar mientras luchas, y trata de no usar detectores de energía para observar".

Hestia: So you are saying that you had all that without training at all *His stats are even higher than Bell-kun and he has a s class skill*.

"Well, yeah, I guess that's a possibility." Crystal said as they dumped their plates and trash into the trash can.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Whether it's physical or whatever, and of course they will hire professional people who are ready to laugh crazy no matter how funny and cringe the joke is, they will laugh madly and take out their kecak dance moves.

nice book // solo lo hago por el fp jeje