Bright Feather - Reviews

oh, an update! what a glorious fight

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I looked up, only to find Rose is now inches away behind my character. The color of his name seemed to be of a darker red. Without a word, he was ready to attack once more. I can't just die here, I can't. I don't want to get killed by someone I don't know.

Xenon:natatakot ka na ba sa akin ate?:( Maymay:hindi xenon nabigla lamang ako,pero hindi ako natatakot,bakit ako matatakot sa kapatid ko:)alam ko naman na hindi moko sasaktan,kasi mabait ka xenon at mahal na mahal ka ng ate mo:)

But the regressor gave no other reaction besides a flat response without turning around.

Title: Hero, World Traveler, Keep Calm

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my cute orange pajamas that had bunnies on them and then I got up and went to eat breakfast with my family downstairs."

too for we had reclaimed our planet over past few years, there were no wars and

It's a good story. it has great potential. It needs an editor to point out grammar errors and typos.

I've been writing novels for over five years, and now I bring you my take on the Cultivation/ Murim/ Xianxia genre.The story unfolds across two realms—a modern, apocalyptic Earth and a mystical Murim world. Liam, our main character, holds a rare power: he can travel between these worlds. Every gain he makes in Murim evolves his body in the real world.As for the FAQs.1. Yes, Romance and harem elements appear, but they aren't the main focus.2. Yes, there will be occasional smut here and there.3. Yes, Gore and violence are part of the tale.4. Yes, The novel is dark and might make you question your own limits.5. Yes, MC will be smart, calm and collective. And sometimes ruthless, merciless, and reckless when needed.6. Yes, There are mind-boggling plot twists. If you've read my other works, you know what I mean.7. Yes, it is not a slow paced novel. Fights and phucks won’t drag out for multiple chapters.8. Yes, it will be updated daily with occasional mass release on weekends.9. Yes, the writing quality will be top-notch.10. Yes, you should definitely read this.

I like the overall idea of the book. From the world building to the dialogues and description. Good work