Black Lion - Reviews

He is definitely doing this on purpose...

Pink shot up from his chair and bowed deeply.

Their fingers were not short at all, and they could be considered slender. Because Gu Jiajia did not need to do farm work, her skin was white and delicate, while Tang Huai had to work. Although her skin was white, it was not as delicate as Gu Jiajia's, so looking at it, her fingers were shorter than Gu Jiajia's.

"What was that now, boy?" A voice sounded above my head and I felt a breath of air on my neck.

The story is nice but it needs improvement in part of the explanation.Also Make bed scenes little more explainable

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I loved the characters and especially the protagonist, the way you wrote it is pretty amazing, and I haven't seen any grammatical errors I've read so far. I'm excited to see how it goes as I read through more chapters and I'm wishing you all the best with the story! Keep up the good work!