Beyond/Odyssey - Reviews

My world's on fire, how about yours?

I took a deep calming breath , but it didn't much to calm me more like hurt me than calm me .

"Yes, Fritz."

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As I always say, system themed stories have a way of making any small flaw go unnoticed. I wish there was more focus on worldbuilding. Nevertheless, the writer does a great job at anchoring the readers interest. This goes to the collection.