Beauty For You - Reviews

Only 2 chapters HV been published so far, and here's my review after reading thoseThe writing style is good, I like the way the author describes the scenarios and environment it's vivid and nice , As for the protagonist and story not  much hv happened so can't really say much, but the story seems promising so waiting for the update?

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" than come to my room and I will kiss you properly" he said smiling.. I kicked him really had on his chest. what ?he was teasing me know ?

"Well, you got a lot of offers, people created fan groups for you. Your acting was fabulous in Yume's show, people became your fan right away," Lumine said.

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

It was very entertaining the main character felt well developed and over all just fun N-gagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagaga gagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagag

Great writing but bad story first of all I don’t really like the main character hes stupid i don’t get why his intelligence are so low he questions everything he has no confidence and don’t believe in anything at all first of all he has a system that gives information about his stats but he thinks it’s useless which it is I don’t know why the system even is in this novel I guess it’s just for use to see how powerful he is that all the system is good for not only that a sword had to tell him how to use the system the mc is just a joke at this point. Another thing that makes no sense is that mc see that the blood line information on how to use it which a normal person can till that its overpower but no he thinks its useless like what.

The writing and story development is good . Only if the detail of background was in more detail. Charater development is good and every chapter is able to deliver twist and turns . Love it.

Highly recommended. Very Interesting story.

This review is based of chapter 32 so things might change later on if author keeps updating. (Novels like these come and dropped so frequently anyway)So this is an isekai story and focuses on harem as the main premise. MC is a harem seeker protagonist so if any of that is off pudding for you then leave. Mc isekaid as he died due to a mistake from a witch who casually kaboomed endless realities and mc's universe was one of them. yadayada. no god giving him special perks but a witch. MC start as baby and is now a 5 year old. so this clearly does take inspiration from Mushoku with the start of child mc. i think he will stay a child for a long while.He has no official wife or lover but has 5 love interests who are all super powerful beings and mc is basically trash in comparison. so expect slow progression with that. Mc's cheat with systems are very unique, its like that super harem god system as in the amount of love routes he clears, he gets more abilities and so. His special abilities are something i have never seen before being used properly. i wont spoil it but you will be pleasently surprise with the perks he gets.This doesnt have those generic level 1 to 9999-- system level up stuff at all so dont expect some linear progression. Background lore of the world does seem pointless for the most part because mc really only cares about his making a big af harem and become a warlock and reach the main world where the Witch exist. (I did left out a lot of stuff which includes how busted the Universe seems to be even without try harding at all)Overall a casual harem novel which has a bait af title coz lets be real most of us who clicked this novel prob expected something else.

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