while im reading this i feel like this is not a just a story it feels alive if you know what i mean this is soo good i hope this will get the attention it deserves anyways i need MORE.
When I was reading this story I felt like I was reading a fairy tale (an enticing one I must say). The fighting scenes are very well written and the characters are likable. As a fellow author, I applaud you for that. You did a great job!
