Awaken - Reviews

"Aku baru saja bangun tidur." jawabnya dengan wajah polosnya, tidak mengerti akan ekspresi kedua manusia yang ada dihadapannya. Mereka berdua terlihat sangat cemas.

"Name?" She asked.

I agree

I (Nie li) was perplexed about this incident. This never happened in past life. There was no assassination attempt, no early demise of sacred family and this Long Tian character was not present in the last life or did he? maybe he might be a mob character in the past life. But these changes were not present in the past life. Am I in the same universe or am I in the alternate timeline? If it is the latter, then I am screwed big-time. If it is former then who is this Long Tian character? Is he same as me, a time traveler or fellow transmigrate? There are few things, that could confirm my theory.

Back the topic at hand, it was found after the death of it's mother Subject 16 awakened it's power. On May 13th of 2083 a squad was dispatched into the cell of Subject 16 all seemed to be going well however subject 16 was extremely evasive and was very hard to capture. An incident occurred with a squad member firing his weapon at the subject, a mistake as Subject 16, like it's mother shape shifted it's arm into a gun barrel similar to that of the guard's standard SS-11 rifle and returned fire. With uncanny precision, Subject 16 took out the entire squad.

Keduanya Tampak menahan Tangisan, dengan mata yang berkaca-kaca,Akhirnya Setelah cukup lama terdiam mereka tiba di Parkiran Apartemen Tyo.

'What Y/N? Why are you here, can't you see I'm working?' He replied bluntly.

"Okay, what if we name it ...."

Nice story, can't wait to read more. Good job author !

Nice story, good job author! I like the book. I can’t help but be intrigued

Well everything is good but the updates are lacking a lot. Try to write more chapters. Just continue writing more. There is a lot of potential here.