Astral World- Mysterious Paper - Reviews

I usually don't review or comment, butI read the novel until 735 and I have to say the novel is trash.The mc hasn’t developed at all. Honestly feels like he got worse, and I’m losing brain cells from reading this.The romance feels like “my three wives are beautiful vampires” but 20 times worse.Some side characters are also okay, but theThe main characters are poorly designed and dumb af.The only good factor throughout the novel is the system and the cultivation system.Only read this far cause people said mc developed, but imma let you know that he didn’t develop at all.But at the end of the day, it's my opinion, you can try it out yourself.

The premise is really interesting. Cannot wait to see where this is going! The grammar and writing are also quite good. Thank you very much wordsmith!

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