Di dalam perjalanan, ketika ia hendak kentut, sopir itu menutupinya kentutnya sambil membunyikan klakson. Setelah beberapa kali membunyikan klakson selama di perjalanan, akhirnya seorang nenek yang menjadi penumpang itu berkata,
Kind of a slow start with the first two chapters but then picks up quickly after. Definitely need to know more about the characters! Like what the heck is going on with Chang? Who is the guy the ghost lady is talking about and whats up with Simon’s dad? If the rest of the story keeps the same writing quality or gets better I’m excited.
Very interesting concept with a dark and intense atmosphere. The story explores deep themes of oppression, power, and resistance. The writing quality is good, and the world-building is engaging. Keep up the great work.
