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After a short walk they entered a large hall filled with his grandfather and uncles

She looked up at me and then sighed, "Its not always action, Cassie." I made a pout and sat back. She never says that, she's more fun loving than I am. What is it today with everybody?

Mana: 9000/9000

I heard of how Schneizel's influence was growing too strong these last few days after analyzing everything, that he might try and overthrow the Emperor and take the throne if things continued as they are since no other prince was capable to stand as Schneizel's equal. I bet that the Emperor and Ciel planned this as a way to balance Schneizel out, taking away everything from me as well as the Mel Britania family and putting it all on Ciel's ambitious but obedient hands.

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

From the first chapter, I couldn't tear my eyes off the book. It has amazing plots and character description that my brain did not cease to seize an opportunity to go out of realityKudos to the writer ?

I don't why the author exposed the mc's system and actually said krishna already know his reincarnation are you saying mc will never be at krishna level even with system help?

Not bad.                                 

This is the first web novel I read, and it seems good.I really liked the idea of the mc acting like an NPC and a player at the same time.I think you can talk a bit more about the mc since we don't know who he is. Though you mentioned some of his character through internal dialogue, we don't even know how he looks. That is why I had to give 4.8 to your character design.Apart from that, I am confused about something. The story has a lot of magus characters and you are saying they are a race, but which race? Are they human?

As a new voice in the world of writing, stepping forward to share this story feels both exciting and intimidating. Much like the moment when a question is posed to a room and everyone hesitates, unsure if they should be the first to speak, I find myself in the same position—taking the leap and being the first to share this experience with you. Writing is not just about putting words on paper; it’s about stepping into the unknown, carving a path where none existed before. As the author, I invite you to join me on this journey—one where discovery and growth await, for both of us. While I may be just beginning, I am eager to see how far this adventure will take us, and I hope you’ll walk alongside me as we explore the possibilities together.

This is evidently a new writer, but the enthusiasm shown in this work is remarkabe. Each chapter is meant to capture the readers attention. Unlike other books i have read this one seeems to capture the normalcy of the human mind and relate on a personal level.