Amazing! Though I’ve read up to chapter 36, I must say, I love how you write! Firstly, I loved how you created atmospheres—it almost reminded me of those sci-fi and Marvel movies I’d watch in theaters. The way you wrote the characters were also splendid and they felt quite life-like. I also like how you depicted the main character (Miller) and his relationship with those around him. The way you established settings was also splendid- it wasn’t overly descriptive nor too plain to the point where it would be glossed over. Though there are occasional grammatical and punctuation errors such as using lowercase letters in situations where it should be capitalized, missing commas, and runoff sentences—it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the novel. For this, I suggest using Grammarly as it helps you with proof reading. Overall, I’d say this novel deserves a 4.6/5, and I’d definitely come back to read this in the future once there are more chapters! Keep it up, author!
