Among Us: The Story - Reviews

Relaxing when she heard the second part the thief calmed down. "Ok, what do you need exactly?"

I glanced at Grea, then to the portal before shrugging and step in. Grea looked around and decided to follow me sheepishly.

When Vladimir arrived at the wreck he had chosen the prior day, he drew out his tools and began to remove fastenings, sweating away, working with his set of tools.

"Hello Mr Lee" she said to break the silence between the two

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great title It looks like a great challenge to accept

Hey there, I am the author of this piece. I hope you are here to read my work and stick around till I finish it. You're simple comments are the motivation I seek to keep pushing, please do comment your thoughts whenever possible.

Cant wait for the next chapter to drop..

'Ti's nice like very nice need to work hard tho to develop more

No matter who you are, if you have read this, feel free to leave any comments—I am happy to engage with you. I also hope you can share your thoughts and suggestions about my story. - from the author.

At the time of writing this review (currently 8 chapters have been published) I believe this story has insane potential and as of now is off to a strong foundation.