"The point is," he shut me off with a very quick, but very memorable, soft kiss on the side of the lips. "The point is, that last night you needed some comforting, and I was very happy to oblige!"
There are many books I have read. There also are many paces in which said stories are meant to be read. Beyond potential, this I truly believe is meant to be published and made to print whenever able. A story where this is headed is not like the majority on this app. It is truly a rare gem. All stories have potential. Rare are they that are already great. If ever finished, this will be one of them.
inspiring, good for all audiences and good characters. i hope you do a lot of world building, and character development as the story progresses. also has good backstories.
Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top